Comments on: Term 4 – Poetry

By: hamish

hamish — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 23:09:06 +0000

There was a young man from norway
he could not fit thourgh the doorway
he went to his house
stood on a mouse
and walked the broadway

Alesha — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 23:04:24 +0000

There was a young man from norway
who nocked his head on the doorway
he fell out of bed
nocked his head
and sang it’s a moray

thanks for the tip Mr C.

casey — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 02:24:14 +0000

There was a young man from Norway
who couldnt get through the doorway
he wanted a date
his name was mate
so he just stood in the doorway

Mr. C this is so hard not much reaslict words ryme with noorway.

ella — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 03:51:52 +0000

there was a big doorway
who had a big hallway
his name was mat
and sat on a hat
who saw the countey norway

Laura — Wed, 18 Nov 2009 20:31:41 +0000

There was a young man from Norway
Who never had anything to say
He was the silent man
From the clan
And he was born in May

Mr C this was really hard I hope this fits.

Renee — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 23:01:59 +0000

There was a young man from Norway
Who run up and down the hallway
His name is Mike
He rid a bike
And he rid into a doorway

Karina — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 22:48:38 +0000

There was a young man from Norway
Who loved to visit Broadway
With a great big bang
It started to hang
Now he visits the gateway

charlotte — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 22:46:18 +0000

There was a youngman from Norway
That couldn’t fit through his doorway
He had a thumb
Stuck up his bum
So he went to the Broadway

I don’t think it is that great though. After a lot of thinking!
Shot Charlz

krissie — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 22:26:14 +0000

There was a young man from Norway
that wanted to go on Broadway
he wasn’t to dumb
but worth a tone
he is just a fat old doorway.

Anna — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 03:32:58 +0000

There was a young man from Norway
Who couldn’t get though the doorway
He wasn’t to wide
Or he wasn’t to thin
He is just a typical man from Norway

Yeah I agree with Alyx its not that good but I cant think of anything that will rhyme with Norway